People can be stupid.
Maybe I'll tell you about this in my next article, but for now,
Here's a less annoying gist:
Yesterday evening, I got a Telegram message from a student of mine.
Ini wrote a small pitch (I was impressed) built around the recent Cyber attack where;
The Twitter account of a former U.S president was hacked
Now pay very rapt attention,
I'm going to lay some deceptively simple -Yet very powerful- Copywriting lesson upon YOU.
His headline went something like:
“Tough Day For Us...”...CEO of $27b company laments after his company was attacked"
Not bad for a start
But since we're in the business of using Gossip to get attention and sell stuff
We might as well sweeten the hook to get more favourable attention:
First, let's look at the story from the perspective of a slay queen:
Former U.S president Barack Obama was one of few elites whose Twitter accounts got hacked in an apparent Bitcoin Scam.
The Others include 3 U.S Billionaires
Bill Gates, Jeff Bezos, and Elon Musk,
Plus the likes of...
Kim Kadashian West, Kanye West, Joe Biden etc
Now. . .
There are many angles from which we could come up with a much more powerful headline and story.
My Lord, may I?
My LORDDDD, may I?
If I may, here are a few examples:
- Former U.S President under attack
- Former U.S president involved in BITCOIN SCAM
- Kim Kadashian and Husband under attack
- Obama and Kim Kadashian Implicated in Crypto Scam???
- Bill Gates and The Bitcoin Conspiracy
- Amazon: Controversy as World's richest man caught up in Bitcoin Scam
- Jeff Bezos swears he knows's nothing about Bitcoin Scam
And so on.
These elites were prime targets of a ruthless cyber attack inspired by Malicious Intent!
Yes, the real target was Twitter itself.
But the trick is to weave a "justifiable story" around your headline
And tie it in with the subject matter so it makes absolute sense to your reader.
How do you do this?
That's a story for another day.
Lets move on.
Listen up: I have a friend who is, Unarguably. . .
Africa's number #1 CPA Trading expert.
What he likes, after he trains someone is,
To have that person place trades with nothing less than $1,000
Michael takes complete newbies and turns them into killers who go into the red ocean of foreign currencies and come out with
Fat chunks of meat! (disturbing sums of money)
He's been doing this for over 10 years.
Now, let me ask you something:
If you HAD to learn how to trade binary options (like maybe you knew the life of your 3-year-old daughter depended on it)
Who would you want to teach you how to MAKE millions trading binary options?
Some sweet-talking financial guru who literally has never had to trade with their own money before?
I don't think you'd chose him to teach you.
Not if your daughter's life depended on it.
I think you'd rather be trained by someone like my friend who has... in real life...
Been putting tens of millions of Naira OF his own money on the line for years... and...
Who is always ready to do it again.
Anytime. Anywhere. Anyplace.
The choice is obvious.
Unless you are a complete moron (and from the look on your face I know you're not),
You always bet on a guy who "walks-the-walk" instead of . . .
Some chest-beating agbero who just "talks-the-talk"
And, when it comes to copywriting...
I'm the guy who "walks-the-walk" and "swims the swim" (I just made that up) ...in the "Red Ocean of direct response marketing and copywriting"
Every damn day!
And... who is always ready and willing to put his own money where his mouth is.
Anytime. Anywhere. Anyplace.
Do you have the guts to go on a ride with me into the REALM of world class Copywriting?
I'm NOT going to lie and tell you it's going to be easy.
It is NOT easy.
But if you have the "heart" for it.
Pay careful attention to what I'm going to say next:
My 1-on-1 coaching program starts in September.
Hol up! Hol up! Hol up!
Before you get too excited,
Understand that it is not for everyone.
So I'm putting strict limitations on who can join;
Here's who my 1-on-1 coaching program is for:
- You're already selling something online (A service or a product)
- You're competitive and never satisfied with settling for average results
- You are a ruthless action taker who implements like crazy
- You've bought at least one of my programs before
- You follow me on Twitter
- You open and read my emails everyday (I know who does and who doesnt)
I’m not just looking to show you how to make a few bucks.
Anyone can do that.
I’m looking to show you how to climb to the top 1% in this thing of ours
Which is exactly where I am today.
The price isn’t cheap…
But if you can’t afford it,
I’d honestly rather you not join me.
This isn’t amateur hour.
It’s the big leagues.
The kiddies can stay at home.
This offer will be extended on a first come, first serve basis.
The fee is the Naira equivalent of N150,000.
Ten persons only.
You can't pay until I've spoken with you on phone.
If you're interested, all you have to do is send me an email (email@example.com) with . . .
- Your full name,
- Your phone number
- A convenient time I can call you.
One more thing:
If you'll be part of this,
I need a firm commitment from you.
You should be always ready to implement stuff.
If you can’t give me that,
Please don’t waste my time.
If you're ready to commit, feel free to send me an email message with
- Your name
- Your phone number (and a convenient time I can call you).
My email is firstname.lastname@example.org